Thursday, October 27

PAGE 12, PANEL 3

All the pages for for the 11-15 sequence are done, but we're currently discussing a small detail about page 12.

Bax writes:

"Now, the only thing bothering me is Evelyn´s main panel in page 12. I going to give it one more try (I did a different version that I didn´t like - I don´t think I even sent you) and we´re done with these pages."

And later she wrote:
"...new panel on page 12. I like it, but I don´t know if I like it more than the first version!"


Here's the three different versions to compare:



I think the first one is probably the strongest first iimpression for Evelyn - and my favorite. Although, I like the latest one a lot.
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